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Thursday, May 22, 2008

Tuesday Shorts - Home

well, folks --- here's my best work yet, cept it needs revision: "and hear a man and woman talking and the" should read: "and a man says to a woman . . ." which would eliminate a few extraneous words and really, there shouldn't be the word "hear" repeated in a story amounting to 46 words anyway. but otherwise it's perfect, don't you thank?

by Carol Novack
46 words

So I'm in The Food Emporium and hear a man and woman talking and the man says to the woman, "Hey, I hear you've been working with wolves; that must be fascinating!" And the woman replies, "Yes, it is!" This was in the dairy section.

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Tuesday Shorts - Home

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